My new song-Tell me what you think!!!

sweetstuff97 · 17-11-2009, 03:47 AM

I made this thread so you guys could post your opinions on my new song i whrote.So post away!

One Day
You build me up and tear me down leaving my heart on the ground and me feeling like a clown,And all i do is say one day i'll turn it all around.

~Chorus~
One day it will turn around and you'll be the one with the bruises and and a
frown,One day it will turn around and your heart will be the one lying on the ground

I might not have any scars you can see but i have plenty of memorys of you and me,Like that day you said i was perfect and called me your baby but five seconds later you started to complain about how i wasn't that pretty and all i did was say one day ill turn it all around and your feelings will be the ones laying crushed on the ground

(chorus)

You come in and say hey babe and slam me on the ground and i say thats it i'm tired of this and turned everything around so how do you feel now that your world came crashing down
now that your the clown
how do you feel now that your heat is the one lying shattered on the ground

~Chorus~
Today i turned it all around now your the one with the bruises and a frownand your heart is the one on the ground

You built me up and tore me down
how do you feel now that i turned it all around

thanks for reading!
~Kylie~ age 13

K3vin · 06-01-2010, 04:10 PM

its really cool do you play any instruments? i play guitar

17-11-2009, 03:47 AM	#1
sweetstuff97 Regular Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 59 My Profile Profile Last Updated: 22-12-2009 Rep Power: 4	My new song-Tell me what you think!!! I made this thread so you guys could post your opinions on my new song i whrote.So post away! One Day You build me up and tear me down leaving my heart on the ground and me feeling like a clown,And all i do is say one day i'll turn it all around. ~Chorus~ One day it will turn around and you'll be the one with the bruises and and a frown,One day it will turn around and your heart will be the one lying on the ground I might not have any scars you can see but i have plenty of memorys of you and me,Like that day you said i was perfect and called me your baby but five seconds later you started to complain about how i wasn't that pretty and all i did was say one day ill turn it all around and your feelings will be the ones laying crushed on the ground (chorus) You come in and say hey babe and slam me on the ground and i say thats it i'm tired of this and turned everything around so how do you feel now that your world came crashing down now that your the clown how do you feel now that your heat is the one lying shattered on the ground ~Chorus~ Today i turned it all around now your the one with the bruises and a frownand your heart is the one on the ground You built me up and tore me down how do you feel now that i turned it all around thanks for reading! ~Kylie~ age 13

06-01-2010, 04:10 PM	#2
K3vin Awesome Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 25 My Profile Profile Last Updated: 06-01-2010 Rep Power: 4	its really cool do you play any instruments? i play guitar __________________